Need a fresh set of eyes to look over your application and provide professional feedback, tips and strategies?
Don't want to ask people at work or let them know you are applying? Get expert review, strategic advice, and actionable critique with a fast 12 to 24 hour turnaround.
What Is the Pitch Review Service?
This service is for applicants who have already drafted their application and want an expert review to refine it. This is not just about polishing your text. It is about equipping you with the skills to write stronger pitches, statements, and responses in the future.
We will pinpoint areas for improvement and guide you on how to present your experience more effectively so you are better prepared for this application and the next.
APS 4 to APS 6
Targeted review and structured feedback for mid-level public sector classifications.
Executive to SES
Advanced strategic review tailored for senior executive leadership expectations.
✓ Who Is This Service For?
- ✅ Applying for public sector roles with selection criteria, from entry-level to senior management.
- ✅ Needing guidance on public service applications requiring a statement of claims or pitch.
- ✅ New to selection criteria or capability frameworks (such as APS ILS or State frameworks) and needing structure.
- ✅ Struggling with an expression of interest (EOI), pitch, or suitability statement.
- ✅ Working in the public service and wanting to position yourself for a promotion.
- ✅ Having already written a solid application and wanting an expert second opinion.
✕ Who Is This Service NOT For?
- ❌ Applicants needing someone to write their application from scratch.
- ❌ Those who have written generic applications without specific achievement examples.
- ❌ Applicants submitting old statements from previous roles without tailoring to the new job description and word limits.
How It Works & Turnaround Time
Submit Documents
Email us your draft pitch, statement, or response, along with your CV, job ad, and relevant guidelines.
Initial Assessment
Within 24 hours, we review your submission to verify review suitability. You will receive an email on next steps.
Payment & Review
Once payment is processed, our ex-hiring managers commence a thorough critique of your draft.
Receive Feedback
Within 12 to 24 hours (excl. Sundays/holidays), receive your marked-up document with actionable comments.
Submit Your Application Details
Select your classification tier below and provide your details to initiate your expert review process.
Important Notes & Limitations
- • You will need to implement suggested edits yourself. We provide expert markup and critique rather than direct editing.
- • Word count limits remain your responsibility. If feedback increases word counts, you must adjust accordingly.
- • This service includes one review only. Subsequent reviews after implementing feedback require a new booking.
- • There are no guarantees of shortlisting. Selection panel outcomes depend on applicant volume and merit competition.